Refer back to your paragraph on being an outsider. Now that you have worked on organization and ideas and content, it is time to post your final copy of your paragraph. Your work should be a minimum of 250 words. Give your best and dazzle your classmates. Remember, do not use your NAME in the paragraph. Change names to protect the innocent.

Organization

1. Do you have a hook or a topic sentence?
2. Is there a flow to your paragraph?
3. What pattern was used to write this paragraph?
4. Do you have a conclusion?

Ideas and Content

1. Main idea is easily recognized
2. Elaboration of situation is clear
3. The reader can identify the particular emotion that you experienced when being an outsider.

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